专题07-书面表达仿真模拟（慰问信+咨询信）-,年高考英语书面表达抢分秘籍
慰问信 【文体概述】
慰问信是指同学亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件，给对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞。要围绕一个中心，鼓励对方并让其从中得到安慰和鼓舞。写信时常包括：对不幸事件表示同情→进行安慰和帮助→鼓励其努力→再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。
【常用语块】
1. 很抱歉/震惊得知……______________________________ 2. 听到……我深感难过______________________________ 3. 请接受我最深切的慰问______________________________ 4. 我想送你我最美好的祝愿______________________________ 5. 我无法相信……______________________________ 6. 对……表示同情______________________________ 7. 我们充满了……______________________________ 8. 请转达我对……的同情______________________________ 9. 最好的祝愿……______________________________ 10. 我们都希望……______________________________ 11. 我相信你会成功……______________________________ 12. 取得完全康复______________________________ 13. 出院______________________________ 14. 我祝愿你快速康复______________________________ 15. 渡过难关______________________________
【套用句式】
1. 听说火灾毁了你漂亮的住宅，我难过极了。
________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我们感到很悲痛。
________________________________________________________________________ 3. 请转达我向你家人的慰问。
________________________________________________________________________
4. 祝你很快康复。
________________________________________________________________________ 5. 大家都希望你早日归来。
________________________________________________________________________
【短文改错】( 做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear John, I am shocking to hear that you have severe flu and now are in hospital. I get this news from your mother and knew you must be absent for half a month at the classes. Do are careful while you are ill. Don’t worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn from them when you return. We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind. You can watch television or listen to radio programs to help pass the time but forget your pains while you recover. I did hope that I can see you soon and bring you any funny cartoons.
Yours truly, Li Hua
【课堂练习】
假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚家乡10月4日遭受台风“彩虹(Typhoon Mujigae)”袭击，洪水毁坏了家园，你作为班长给正在抗洪的他写一封慰问信，要点如下：
1. 对该同学表示关心； 2. 向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和补习； 3. 表达希望和对其重建家园的信心。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Wang Gang, We’re so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【课外作业】
假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中国好声音(The Voice of China)比赛，没有进入决赛，感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信，要点如下：
1. 表示难过和理解； 2. 失败原因不在于他，而是另有别的缘故； 3. 勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Li Ming, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua
慰问信 常用语块 1. I was so sorry/shocked to learn of the news that… 2. I am deeply sorry to hear that…/ I just can’t tell you how sorry I am to hear that… 3. Please accept my deepest sympathy… 4. I want to send you my best wishes for… 5. I couldn’t believe that…
6. have/show sympathy for… 7. We are filled with… 8. Please convey my sympathy to… 9. Best wishes for… 10. We are all hoping… 11. I am sure you will succeed in… 12. make a full recovery 13. leave the hospital / be discharged from the hospital 14. I wish you swift/quick/speedy recovery 15. go through the difficulty 套用句式 1. I was so sorry to hear of the fire that destroyed your beautiful house. 2. We are filled with deep sorrow. 3. Please convey my sympathy to your family. 4. Best wishes for your speedy recovery. 5. We are all hoping you will be back soon. 短文改错 作者写信给约翰，对其生病表示慰问。
1. shocking→shocked
主要是人，要用 shocked。
2. 在 severe flu 前加 a
因 flu 是可数名词。
3. knew→know
因要与并列谓语 get 时态保持一致。
4. at→from
固定搭配 be absent from 意为“缺席”。
5. are→be
祈使句，故要用 be。
6. lesson→lessons
根据后面的 them 可知要用复数。
7. 去掉 them 前的 from
根据文意可知，此处是指“帮助你学习功课”，而不是“向功课学习”。
8. but→and
此处显然是“顺承”关系，而非“转折”关系。
9. did→do
全文主体时态是一般现在时。
10. any→some
肯定句要用 some。
课堂练习 Dear Wang Gang,
We’re so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins. We’re filled with deep sorrow. Please convey my sympathy to your family. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as a monitor, on behalf of our class, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of some money, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. We believe that with the help of so many kind people, a better house can be rebuilt. Finally, we’re all hoping you’ll be back soon and we will make up the lessons for you. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely, Li Hua 课外作业 Dear Li Ming, I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter the finals of The Voice of China of this year. I quite understand how you feel now. You have been doing well and your failure is not your own fault, I am sure. However, as we know, failure is the mother of success. I do hope you won’t lose heart and will get ready to try again. Still you have many more chances to try for you are so young. Fate (命运) only can be changed by working hard, so if you go on practising singing, I am sure you will succeed next year. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua
咨询信 【文体概述】
咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分内容：1. 说明自己的计划或目的，也就是询问信息的原因；2. 征询具体信息；3. 期待回复并表示感谢。
【常用语块】
1. 寻求帮助_________________________________ 2. 向某人提供某物_________________________________
3. 首先_________________________________ 4. 盼望着_________________________________ 5. 更多的信息_________________________________ 6. 即将到来_________________________________ 7. 为……向某人收取……费用_________________________________
8. 为……而表示感激之情_________________________________ 9. 对……来说很重要_________________________________ 10. 寄回_________________________________ 11. 对......感兴趣_________________________________ 12. 参加_________________________________ 13. 决心要做某事_________________________________ 14. 希望......_________________________________ 15. 缺乏/缺少_________________________________
【套用句式】
1. 如果能给我提供……方面的信息我将不胜感激。
__________________________________________________________________ 2. 我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信息。
__________________________________________________________________ 3. 此外，有没有我要特别注意的事情？ __________________________________________________________________ 4. 您能告诉我……吗？ __________________________________________________________________ 5. 期待您及时答复。
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【短文改错】( 做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student in China or I plan to go to Britain to attend summer school during the vacation. I had seen your advertisement, and I would like to know anything more about your six-week English course. First where will the course start and how many class hour are there per week? Beside, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. What I would also like to know how much I have to pay to the course and whether accommodation is including. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua
【课堂练习】
假定你是李华，最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有称职教练(instructor)，一周包会。你会一点游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况，要点如下：
1. 训练的具体时间和地点； 2. 条件和费用； 3. 其他特别注意的事项。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper._______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【课外作业】
假定你是李华，寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游，可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了，所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下：
1. 入住时间：1 月 27 日～2 月 5 日；房间号：608 2. 相机：型号 Canon Ixus860，白色；你的 17 岁生日礼物，很重要 3. 请他/她帮你寻找并寄回，表示感谢 4. 你的地址在信封上 注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam, I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua
咨询信 常用语块 1. ask for help 2. provide sb. with sth. 3. to start with 4. look forward to 5. further information 6. round the corner 7. charge sb. for…
8. be grateful for… 9. be important to… 10. post back 11. be interested in…/take interest in… 12. take part in/participate in 13. make up my mind to do sth. 14. in the hope of/that 15. be short of / be in lack/demand of 套用句式 1. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning… 2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding… 3. Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to? 4. Would you be so kind as to tell me…? 5. I am looking forward to your immediate response. 短文改错 作者写信 咨询 参加暑期英语培训课程的一些情况。
1. or→and
两句之间是“顺承”关系，而非“选择”关系。
2. 在 summer 前加 a
单数可数名词前用不定冠词表泛指。
3. had→have
根据上下文语境，此处应用现在完成时。
4. anything→something
肯定句要用 something。
5. where→when
根据上下文逻辑，此处应该是表“什么时候”的疑问句。故填 when。
6. hour→hours
因 how many 后须用名词的复数形式。
7. Beside→Besides
此处表示补充说明关系“此外/而且”，beside 意为“在......旁边”。
8. 去掉 I would also 前的 What
后面是一个完整的句子，What 在此显然是多余的。
9. to→for
固定短语 pay for 意为“为......付费”。
10. including→included
此处为被动结构，意为“......包含在内”。
课堂练习 Dear Sir/Madam, I have read your advertisement in the newspaper. You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.
I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water. So I’m interested in taking part in the training course. Fortunately, the summer holiday is around the corner. I’m writing to inquire when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day. I also want to know how much you will charge me for that. Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 课外作业 Dear Sir/Madam, I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but I’m writing to ask for your help with sending back my camera that I left in your hotel. I checked in on January 27 and out on February 5 and stayed in Room 608 for the whole time. Perhaps because I left in such a rush for the airport, I made the mistake of leaving my camera in the room. Since it was a gift from my parents on my 17th birthday, it’s very important to me. It’s a white Canon Ixus860. I would be very grateful if you could help me find it. If found, the camera can be posted back to me by using the address on the envelope. I am looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua